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When an individual may be vital to the nation’s safety, can she be permitted to make her own choices? Which is the lesser evil: to restrict her future for the sake of the realm, or to grant her the same freedom as her fellow subjects, even if doing so may—or may not—endanger the country?

“Recommended” 12 November 2018 by Present Perfect

Addenda: So . . . the positive comments I’m seeing boil down to “this is a great little short story—it’s so quiet and introspective and it uses PDF for presentation!” The negative comments I’m seeing boil down to “this is a terrible little short story—it’s so quiet and introspective and it uses PDF for presentation!” Mm-hm.

Not surprisingly, “Wonderbolts Academy”, flawed as it is, pretty well scotches several aspects of the story—though the underlying question and dilemma still hold up. Most notably, the Wonderbolts now appear to be a much larger organization than previous episodes implied, perhaps a full service in its own right rather than an élite arm of the Royal Guard.

There’s no way around the fact that running something that big is a general’s job. Spitfire is insanely young to be holding a rank normally achieved only in one’s forties or later; on the other hand, private conferences with the Crown are much more likely (indeed, they would be required) for a general officer than for a field-grade officer.

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I found the story quite pleasing for most of the same reasons you spoke of. I'm also impressed this was apparently only your second MLP fanfiction, written nine years ago as of this comment. Had you much prior experience as a creative writer? Your technique seemed quite professional and well-practiced.

I greatly appreciate PDF format, much preferring it to downloading offline copies of webpages. Not only is the presentation usually better, there's no rat's nest of extraneous files and irrelevant page data that need to be preserved and eat up hard drive space. I download and archive a lot of files, and the little drops in the bucket add up.